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-This document establishes an architectural pattern whereby a remote attestation could be issued for a complete set of benchmarks or controls that are defined and grouped by an external entity, preventing the need to send over individual attestations for each item within a benchmark or control framework.
-This document establishes a pattern to list sets of benchmarks and controls within CWT and JWT formats for use as an Entity Attestation Token (EAT).
+This document establishes an architectural pattern whereby a remote attestation could be issued for a complete set of benchmarks or controls that are defined and grouped by an external entity, eliminating the need to send over individual attestations for each item within a benchmark or control framework.
+This document establishes a pattern to list sets of benchmarks and controls within CWT and JWT formats for use as an Entity Attestation Token (EAT). While the discussion below pertains mostly to TPM, other Roots of Trust such as TCG DICE, and non-TCG defined components will also be inclulded.
 
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 # Introduction
 
 Posture assessment has long been desired, but has been difficult to achieve due to complexities of customization requirements at each organization.
-By using policy and measurement sets that may be offered at various assurance levels, local assessment of evidence can be performed to continuously assess compliance. An example of a form of local attestation is through the Trusted Computing Group's Trusted Platform Module (TPM) format and assessment method. This and other methods provide a secured log for transparency on the results of the assessed evidence against expected values. In order to support continuous monitoring of posture assessment and integrity in an enterprise or large data center, the local assessments and remediation are useful to reduce load on the network and remote resources. This is currently done today for the so called trusted boot process. It is useful to share the results of the compliance to expected values for measurements and policies in order to gain a bigger picture view of the governance, risk, and compliance posture for a network. As such, communicating a summary result as evidence tied including a link to supporting logs with a remote attestation defined in an Entity Attestation Token (EAT) profile [I-D.ietf-rats-eat] provides a way to accomplish that goal. The level of integration for local attestation meeting defined policies and measurements at specific levels, including the ability to remediate makes posture assessment through attestation achievable for organizations of all sizes due to integration being required in existing toolsets and systems, built as an intrinsic capability.
+By using policy and measurement sets that may be offered at various assurance levels, local assessment of evidence can be performed to continuously assess compliance. An example of a form of attestation is through the Trusted Computing Group's Trusted Platform Module (TPM) format and assessment method. This and other methods provide a secured log for transparency on the results of the assessed evidence against expected values. In order to support continuous monitoring of posture assessment and integrity in an enterprise or large data center, the local assessments and remediation are useful to reduce load on the network and remote resources. This is currently done today for the so called trusted boot process. It is useful to share the results of the compliance to expected values for measurements and policies in order to gain a bigger picture view of the governance, risk, and compliance posture for a network. As such, communicating a summary result as evidence tied including a link to supporting logs with a remote attestation defined in an Entity Attestation Token (EAT) profile [I-D.ietf-rats-eat] provides a way to accomplish that goal. The level of integration for attestation meeting defined policies and measurements at specific levels, including the ability to remediate makes posture assessment through attestation achievable for organizations of all sizes due to integration being required in existing toolsets and systems, built as an intrinsic capability.
 The measurement and policy grouping results summarized in an EAT profile may be provided by the vendor or by a neutral third party to enable ease of use and consistent implementations. The local system or server host performs the assessment of posture and remediation.
 This provides simpler options to enable posture assessment at selected levels by organizations without the need to have in-house expertise.
 The measurement and policy sets may also be customized, but not necessary to achieve posture assessment to predefined options.