From 94ea3bca75365d9910cebede271083b3b7cb484c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mannan Javid <mannanjavid@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 30 May 2024 23:57:20 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] updates

---
 src/app/components/about/about.component.html | 10 +++++++---
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/app/components/about/about.component.html b/src/app/components/about/about.component.html
index 19fac5a..a7223b9 100644
--- a/src/app/components/about/about.component.html
+++ b/src/app/components/about/about.component.html
@@ -14,14 +14,14 @@ <h1>About</h1>
   
   <!--         I am a multi-disciplinary engineer, leader, and student. I'm passionate about success through  communication, effective practices, and asymmetric risk taking. -->
   <p class="margin-0 margin-top-60">
-    I am a multi-disciplinary engineer, leader, and student. I'm passionate about success through strong communication, effective practices, and asymmetric risk taking.
+    I am a multi-disciplinary engineer, leader, and student. I'm passionate about success through effective practice, strong communication, and  asymmetric risk taking.
   </p>
   
   <!--         I grew through a career as a member of tight teams in risky and high velocity initiatives. I've had lots of experience building digital products in a variety of environments. I've also had experience coordinating teams. -->
   
   <!--         I grew through a career as a member of tight teams in fast-paced initiatives. I've had experience building unique products in a diverse range of environments, from non-profits, government, and commercial. -->
   <p>
-    I grew through a career as a member of tight teams in fast-paced initiatives. I've had experience building unique products in a range of environments, from non-profits to government and commercial.
+    I grew through a career of tight teams in fast-paced initiatives. I've had experience building unique products in a range of environments, from non-profits to government and commercial.
   </p>
   
   <!-- variations I measure my success through the discipline of team to journey into the waters of the new and uncertain. -->
@@ -41,8 +41,12 @@ <h1>About</h1>
   <!--         I measure my success by the strength of those around me in times of uncertainty. My greatest passion is to be open to learn, discover simplicity, and embrace the dance of authentically and trustfully communicating teams. -->
   
   <!--         I measure my success by the strength of those around me. My greatest passion is to be open to learn, discover simplicity, and embrace the dance of authentically and trustfully communicating teams. -->
-  <p>
+  <!-- <p>
     I measure my success by the strength of those around me. My greatest passion is to be open to learn, discover simplicity, and embrace the dance of authentically and trustfully communicating teams.
+  </p> -->
+
+  <p>
+    I measure my success by the strength of those around me. My greatest passion is to distill the simple from the complex, and to find flow and trust within my teams.
   </p>
   <button (click)="navService.goTo(navService.Links.resume)"  class="margin-top-60">View My Resume</button>
 </div>
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