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content(cms): create Resource "data-and-databases-scoping-a-database/index" #1088

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@emilykateemilykate emilykateemilykate force-pushed the cms/emilykateemilykate/dariah-campus/posts/data-and-databases-scoping-a-database/index branch from a9efc36 to 8d41016 Compare July 10, 2024 13:23
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VickyGarnett commented Oct 1, 2024

Hi @emilykateemilykate - as with the other two database courses, you should remove any mention of 'sections' when you mean other resources. You should probably check back through this more thoroughly, but one example I found is two paragraphs below the map of the world, there is: "We have previously (in section two, From Source to Data) discussed the difference between ...". This refers to a different resource. Rather, I would remove this reference and instead give a very quick synopsis of the point you're making. Just maybe start with 'the difference between.....'. Does that make sense?

Just have a quick check through all the other resource to make sure there aren't other references like this, and that you don't call resources 'sections' because it suggests that this was one big module that was split up onto smaller ones.

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