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     The U.S. Census Bureau will be shutting down <a href="https://facdissem.census.gov">their site</a> that distributes Single Audit data on March 31, 2024.
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-    The GSA FAC team wants to thank our colleagues at the Census Bureau. They have been incredible partners as we transitioned the FAC, and their support and partnership has been a marvelous example of what it means to serve the public with excellence.
+    The GSA FAC team wants to thank our colleagues at the Census Bureau. They've been incredible partners during this transition and their support and partnership has been a marvelous example of what it means to serve the public with excellence.
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