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-					<h1><strong>Sherelyn Alejandro Merchan</strong><br />
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 					Astronomer<br />
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-					Incoming Physics Ph.D. Student<br />@ CUNY Grad Center </h1>
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 							<h2>About Me</h2>
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-						<p> I am a fourth-year undergraduate at Hunter College CUNY, pursuing a B.A in physics and concentration in math and philosophy. My research lies within the realm of analyzing the atmospheres of exoplanets, brown dwarfs and low mass stars.<br />
-						After I graduate Hunter in May 2024, I will be attending graduate school at the CUNY Graduate Center to pursue a Ph.D. in Physics with the research group Brown Dwarfs in NYC at the American Museum of Natural History.<br />
-							Besides research, I am enthusiastic about science communication in both English and Spanish, sharing my love for astronomy with others.   </p>
+						<p> Currently, I am a fourth-year undergraduate at Hunter College CUNY, finishing a BA in Physics with minors in math and philosophy. In regard to research, I am part of the research group Brown Dwarfs in NYC where my work focuses on determining fundamental parameters of brown dwarfs. <br />After graduating Hunter in June 2024, I will be attending graduate school at the CUNY Graduate Center to pursue a Ph.D. in Physics with Dr. Jackie Faherty and Prof. Kelle Cruz at the American Museum of Natural History.
+							Besides research, I am enthusiastic about science communication in both English and Spanish, sharing my love for astronomy with others.</p>
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