Update front page content #5413
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I love this repositioning! I defer to @MaryaBelanger for a copy review though :)
Consider updating the .github profile as well: https://github.com/dart-lang/.github/tree/main/profile
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Thanks @mit-mit! Could you add a period (.) to the end of each of the bullets in the three main sections ("Approachable", "Productive development", and "Fast on all platforms")?
I left comments on the sentences you edited, but really they should all end with periods, if that's not too much trouble to take care of now (and if it is just lmk and I'll take care of it in another pr!)
Co-authored-by: Parker Lougheed <[email protected]> Co-authored-by: Marya <[email protected]>
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Update front page text to better match current language positioning. --------- Co-authored-by: Parker Lougheed <[email protected]> Co-authored-by: Marya <[email protected]>
Update front page text to better match current language positioning.
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