Refine Take-A-Number

concepts/processes/introduction.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ In Elixir, all code runs inside processes.
 By default, a function will execute in the same process from which it was called. When you need to explicitly run a certain function in a new process, use `spawn/1`:
 
 ```elixir
-spawn(&my_function/0)
+spawn(fn -> 2 + 2 end)
 # => #PID<0.125.0>
 ```
 

exercises/concept/take-a-number/.docs/hints.md

@@ -8,16 +8,17 @@
 ## 1. Start the machine
 
 - The machine should run in a new process. There is [a built-in function that starts a new process][kernel-spawn-1].
-- You will need another function that the new process will execute. You can name it, for example, `loop`.
-- Use the [capture operator][special-forms-capture] to pass a named function as an argument.
+- Use a 0-arity anonymous function when starting a new process. This function doesn't need to do anything yet.
 
 ## 2. Report the machine state
 
-- The machine's process needs to respond to messages.
+- You will need a new named function. You can name it, for example, `loop`.
+- This new function should accept one argument, the state.
+- The 0-arity anonymous function from the previous step can call the new named function, passing the initial state.
+- The new named function needs to respond to messages.
 - There is [a built-in function that waits for a message to arrive in the process's mailbox][kernel-receive].
 - There is [a built-in function that sends a message to another process][kernel-send].
 - Use recursion to wait for more than one message.
-- Pass the machine's state as an argument to the recursive function.
 
 ## 3. Give out numbers
 
@@ -27,6 +28,7 @@
 
 - This step doesn't require sending any messages as a response.
 - A process will exit if it has no more code to execute.
+- When you need to create an "empty" code block in Elixir, you can use `nil` as the only expression in that code block. 
 - This is a base case of the recursive function.
 
 ## 5. Ignore unexpected messages
@@ -39,4 +41,3 @@
 [kernel-spawn-1]: https://hexdocs.pm/elixir/Kernel.html#spawn/1
 [kernel-receive]: https://hexdocs.pm/elixir/Kernel.SpecialForms.html#receive/1
 [kernel-send]: https://hexdocs.pm/elixir/Kernel.html#send/2
-[special-forms-capture]: https://hexdocs.pm/elixir/Kernel.SpecialForms.html#&/1

exercises/concept/take-a-number/.docs/instructions.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ You are writing an embedded system for a Take-A-Number machine. It is a very sim
 
 ## 1. Start the machine
 
-Implement the `start/0` function. It should spawn a new process that has an initial state of `0` and is ready to receive messages. It should return the process's PID.
+Implement the `start/0` function. It should spawn a new process and return the process's PID. The new process doesn't need to do anything yet.
 
 ```elixir
 TakeANumber.start()
@@ -15,12 +15,15 @@ Note that each time you run this code, the PID may be different.
 
 ## 2. Report the machine state
 
-Modify the machine so that it can receive `{:report_state, sender_pid}` messages. It should send its current state (the last given out ticket number) to `sender_pid` and then wait for more messages.
+Modify the machine so that the newly spawned process is ready to receive messages (start a _receive loop_) with an initial state of `0`. It should be able to receive `{:report_state, sender_pid}` messages. As a response to those messages, it should send its current state (the last given out ticket number) to `sender_pid` and then wait for more messages.
 
 ```elixir
 machine_pid = TakeANumber.start()
+
+# a client sending a message to the machine
 send(machine_pid, {:report_state, self()})
 
+# a client receiving a message from the machine
 receive do
   msg -> msg
 end
@@ -34,8 +37,11 @@ Modify the machine so that it can receive `{:take_a_number, sender_pid}` message
 
 ```elixir
 machine_pid = TakeANumber.start()
+
+# a client sending a message to the machine
 send(machine_pid, {:take_a_number, self()})
 
+# a client receiving a message from the machine
 receive do
   msg -> msg
 end

exercises/concept/take-a-number/.docs/introduction.md

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ In Elixir, all code runs inside processes.
 By default, a function will execute in the same process from which it was called. When you need to explicitly run a certain function in a new process, use `spawn/1`:
 
 ```elixir
-spawn(&my_function/0)
+spawn(fn -> 2 + 2 end)
 # => #PID<0.125.0>
 ```