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fix typos in the new xcodebuild formatter page #1133
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Fix typos.
rogerluan a0f6bec
Fix typos
janbrasna e2777e6
Improve wording.
rogerluan 83aaed8
#1142 fix more typos in the new xcodebuild formatter page
rogerluan 40a1948
Update list wording.
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I debated this when I wrote it haha I opted to use
It's
because when read in isolation it sounds a lot better thanis
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As a non-English speaker I don't usually have too much of an insight into such fine details in wording, so I'd like to leave that to someone better equipped for such assessment ;D
It's just an observation, if the heading starts with "because it: …" I'm sort of expecting the lines to be an ending to this sentence. That's why my gut feeling kinda expects every line to actually a) start with lowercase, b) finish the sentence. Like:
(but that stylisation is not present in other places of the text with all bullet lines being capitalised even when they form a part of a sentence… hence my hesitation to suggest a "correction" as I'm not too skilled in language matters TBH;D…)
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That makes sense but makes skimming through the page a bit more confusing and requires more reading (cognitive friction) IMO. I've updated it to something else that might help, lmk what you think @janbrasna 😊
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I've checked the copy style in other parts of the docs and yes, they are all sentence-case (w/o a closing full stop) when used as bullet/list items usually used in an infinitive form following the preceding intro text. So please disregard any comments I may have made.
The only form I could've come up with is to reword in a way to make use of the infinitives like:
(or any cumbersome formulations as "it is known to:", "it is intended to:" but that's all weird compared to just saying it's what it is…) — besides that I'm out of any drive-by improvements, sorry;)