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 # oneDrive MyWay
 
-This repository is code I used to manage syncing a Windows 10 folder with a personal oneDrive account without adding the account to the Windows 10 native oneDrive app.  This is useful when syncing something up one-time, or when using a computer restricted according to a Windows security policy set which disables personal oneDrive accounts being added to the synchronization application (common with work computers).
+This repository is code I used to manage syncing a Windows 10 folder with a personal oneDrive account without adding the account to the Windows 10 native oneDrive app.  
 
-Take note that the security policy will have to [authorize the underlying Azure libraries](https://github.com/Azure/Microsoft365R/blob/master/inst/app_registration.md), but it is common to find these libraries authorized (for other reasons) even in highly secure business environments.
+This is useful when using a computer restricted according to Windows security policies to disable adding personal oneDrive accounts to the native Windows 10 synchronization application (a common configuration for work computers).
 
-In brief, one generates an authentication token for the personal oneDrive account and declares it during an R session using .Renviron (see Renviron_example.txt).  Once the session closes, the token is no longer available.  Be advised that this method depends upon node.js (linked below) and the Microsoft Office 365 Command-Line Interface being installed on the workstation in use.  
+Take note that the aforementioned business Windows security policy must [authorize the underlying Azure libraries](https://github.com/Azure/Microsoft365R/blob/master/inst/app_registration.md) to get this to work at all, but it is common to find these libraries authorized (for other reasons), even in highly secure business environments.  Some [Azure features](https://azure.microsoft.com/en-us/services/graph-data-connect/) rely on these libraries also.
 
-Take note, I was also able to install these on a remote server (hosting [RStudio Workbench Server Pro](https://www.rstudio.com/products/rstudio/#rstudio-server) in my use-case) without using a GUI for the purposes of enabling oneDrive business accounts as well.
+In brief, one generates an authentication token for the personal oneDrive account and declares it during an R session using .Renviron (see Renviron_example.txt).  Once the session closes, the token is no longer available.  Be advised that this method depends upon node.js (linked below) and the Microsoft Office 365 Command-Line Interface being installed on the workstation in use.  
 
 ## What to expect
 
-When you run the get_personal_onedrive() function the first time, it will either call [httpuv](https://github.com/rstudio/httpuv) (if you're using RStudio Workbench, for example) to get you to authenticate with your system web browser, or, if httpuv is not present, or you're doing this over a CLI, it will drop to the "device code" method (one can pre-select this method with with get_onedrive_personal(auth_type= "device_code")) and give you a TEXT string to enter into any web browser that is authorized on the personal oneDrive account (like your cell phone) much like authorizing a TV streaming application or similar.
+When you run the get_personal_onedrive() function the first time, it will either call [httpuv](https://github.com/rstudio/httpuv) (if you're using RStudio Workbench, for example) to get you to authenticate with your system web browser. 
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+If httpuv is not present (or you're doing this over a CLI) it will drop to the "device code" method (one can pre-select this method with with get_onedrive_personal(auth_type= "device_code")) and give you a TEXT string to enter into any web browser that is authorized on the personal oneDrive account (like your cell phone) much like authorizing a TV streaming application or similar.
 
 Good luck!