Improve text of api-fetching.mdx

src/routes/documentation/tutorial/api-fetching.mdx

@@ -17,11 +17,11 @@ import Breadcrumbs from '@/components/Breadcrumbs'
 
 # API fetching
 
-The goal is to use the [PokeAPI](https://pokeapi.co/docs/v2) to list all the Pokémon of the first generation (the best one, btw) and then reserve a dynamic page for each one separately.
+In this tutorial, we will fetch a list of all first generation Pokémons (the best ones, btw) from the [PokeAPI](https://pokeapi.co/docs/v2) and create a dynamic page for each of them.
 
 ## Fetch all the Pokémon
 
-To start, let’s fetch all of them from the root page. Since we want to render them on the server side, we are going to need to implement the logic in the `index.rs` file.
+Let's start by fetching the data on the root page. Since we want to render the Pokémons on the server, we need to implement the logic in the `index.rs` file.
 
 Clear the `index.rs` file and paste:
 
@@ -56,31 +56,31 @@ async fn get_all_pokemons(_req: Request, fetch: Client) -> Response {
 }
 ```
 
-> The first argument is always the request `req: Request` which contains all the request's data like the query parameters and the HTTP headers.
-> The rest of the arguments represents the [ApplicationState](/documentation/application-state) and are optional.
+> The first argument is always `req: Request`, which contains all the request data like the query parameters and the HTTP headers.
+> The other arguments represent the [ApplicationState](/documentation/application-state) and are optional.
 
-The terminal will complain now for two reasons:
+After doing this, the terminal will complain for two reasons:
 
-1. We don't have imported any `reqwest` crate
-2. The second argument `fetch: Client` has not been defined yet as global state.
+1. We haven't imported the `reqwest` crate
+2. The second argument `fetch: Client` hasn't been defined as global state yet.
 
-Let's fix these in the next section.
+Let's fix them in the next section.
 
 ## Application state
 
-Compared to the common Javascript runtimes, Tuono is fast because only the features you need for your project will be loaded.
+Compared to JavaScript runtimes, Tuono is lightning fast because it only loads the features that you need for your project.
 
-You can load them in the `ApplicationState` of your app inside the `./src/app.rs` file. This is the file that will be executed just once at the very beginning of your application.
+You can load them in the `ApplicationState` inside the `./src/app.rs` file. This file is executed just once at the very beginning of your application.
 
-> For the tutorial we will use [Reqwest](https://docs.rs/reqwest/latest/reqwest/) which is one of the most famous HTTP library.
+> For the tutorial we will use [Reqwest](https://docs.rs/reqwest/latest/reqwest/), which is one of the most popular HTTP libraries.
 
-To install it just run in your terminal:
+To install it, run in your terminal:
 
 ```sh
 cargo add reqwest
 ```
 
-A new entry has just been added to your `Cargo.toml` file.
+A new entry was added to your `Cargo.toml` file.
 
 ```diff
 [package]
@@ -98,13 +98,13 @@ serde = { version = "1.0.202", features = ["derive"] }
 ++ reqwest = "0.12.9" # the version might be different
 ```
 
-> The `Cargo.toml` is the manifest file of your application, in which you handle Rust's dependencies
-> (similarly as the package.json for Javascript).
+> The `Cargo.toml` file is the manifest of your application and it contains Rust's dependencies
+> (similar to the `package.json` file for JavaScript).
 
 Now let's define the `ApplicationState` in the `./src/app.rs` file.
 
 ```rs
-// Import here the just added reqwest library
+// Import the reqwest library
 use reqwest::Client;
 
 #[derive(Clone)]
@@ -120,12 +120,12 @@ pub fn main() -> ApplicationState {
 }
 ```
 
-Now the `fetch: Client` argument is available in the above defined handler, and the terminal should not complain anymore.
-Let's see in the next section how to show the fetched data on the browser.
+Now that the `fetch: Client` argument is available in the handler, the errors in the terminal should have disappeared.
+In the next section, we'll render the fetched data in the browser.
 
 ## Handling the page UI
 
-Now the Pokémon are correctly fetched and hydrated on the client side, so we can actually use them. Clear the `index.tsx` file and paste:
+With the Pokémons correctly fetched and hydrated on the client, we can finally render them. Clear the `index.tsx` file and paste:
 
 ```tsx
 // src/routes/index.tsx
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ export default function IndexPage({
 }
 ```
 
-Refresh the browser now! A bit ugly, but all the Pokémon are finally printed on screen!
+Time to refresh the browser! Still a bit ugly, but all the Pokémon are finally on the screen!
 
 import NavigationButtons from '../../../components/NavigationButtons'