docs(tutorial/api-fetching): improve text and snippet code

[nicolasgasco]

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Overview

With this small PR, I'd like to introduce some small tweaks to text of the API fetching page of the tutorial.

Some of the changes are typo and grammar fixes, while some others are more subjective, but they all contribute (at least in my opinion) to making the page more pleasant to read.

I included a small tweak to the tsx snippet as well in order to:

• render the Pokemons list in a more pleasant way (see below)
• avoid using index for key, since it's not considered a good practice and the Pokemons names are a better candidate

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[Valerioageno]

Thanks @nicolasgasco!
FYI we need to fix this bug on tuono before merging this PR...

[nicolasgasco]

Thanks for your contribution. I like the way you improved the text on this page!

I left a few suggestion, let me know what do you think about them!

Also please fix the format check by running:

pnpm run format:fix

@marcalexiei it's not raising any diff when I run it 🤔

[marcalexiei]

it's not raising any diff when I run it 🤔

It seems like you’ve changed the code, so the formatting error is no longer present.
The CI was failing as you can see in this run.

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Side note: Could you please avoid using force pushes in the future?
They make incremental reviews more difficult (https://tuono.dev/documentation/contributing/pull-requests#overview)

[jacobhq]

Nice work here. I've added a few suggestions just to make it a bit smoother to read, but apart from that, looks great!

[nicolasgasco]

Side note: Could you please avoid using force pushes in the future?
They make incremental reviews more difficult (https://tuono.dev/documentation/contributing/pull-requests#overview)

@marcalexiei Absolutely, sorry for that!

[marcalexiei]

Looks good to me, thanks again for your work on this.

When you have the change check #42 🚀

[jacobhq]

Thanks!