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| ==== image:images/caution.png[with caution] on-premise (adjective) | |||
| *Description*: Substitute "on-site" or "in-house" for "on-premise" whenever possible. Although "on-premises" is grammatically correct, "on-premise" is preferred by the industry and the Red{nbsp}Hat Cloud business unit. Capitalize "on-premise" only when using it as part of the name of the Red{nbsp}Hat product "Red{nbsp}Hat Storage Server for On-premise". | |||
| *Description*: Substitute "on-site" or "in-house" for "on-premise" whenever possible. For Red{nbsp}Hat OpenShift Container Platform, _on-premise_ is a collective term for grouping the bare-metal, VMware vSphere, Nutanix, and Red{nbsp}Hat OpenStack Platform (RHOSP) platforms, so you can use the term in this context. Although "on-premises" is grammatically correct, "on-premise" is preferred by the industry and the Red{nbsp}Hat Cloud business unit. Capitalize "on-premise" when using it as part of the name of the Red{nbsp}Hat product "Red{nbsp}Hat Storage Server for On-premise". | |||
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I'd consider moving this to after the "Although..." sentence. Because the last sentence is also another caveat/additional direction for a specific product. So I'd move this to be either the third or fourth sentence.
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| *Description*: Substitute "on-site" or "in-house" for "on-premise" whenever possible. For Red{nbsp}Hat OpenShift Container Platform, _on-premise_ is a collective term for grouping the bare-metal, VMware vSphere, Nutanix, and Red{nbsp}Hat OpenStack Platform (RHOSP) platforms, so you can use the term in this context. Although "on-premises" is grammatically correct, "on-premise" is preferred by the industry and the Red{nbsp}Hat Cloud business unit. Capitalize "on-premise" when using it as part of the name of the Red{nbsp}Hat product "Red{nbsp}Hat Storage Server for On-premise". | |
| *Description*: Substitute "on-site" or "in-house" for "on-premise" whenever possible. Although "on-premises" is grammatically correct, "on-premise" is preferred by the industry and the Red{nbsp}Hat Cloud business unit. Capitalize "on-premise" when using it as part of the name of the Red{nbsp}Hat product "Red{nbsp}Hat Storage Server for On-premise". For Red{nbsp}Hat OpenShift Container Platform, _on-premise_ is a collective term for grouping the bare-metal, VMware vSphere, Nutanix, and Red{nbsp}Hat OpenStack Platform (RHOSP) platforms, so you can use the term in this context. |
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Address issue #485
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Vale update also needed for "on-premise" in the context of OCP but I'll make this update in a separate project.